Author: Millie

The Chosen one

part 1 the chosen one

Narrated 18 years ago The Queen was dead leaving everyone with questions..her departure destroyed the Palace their king couldn't live without his Queen the love of his life.his world crashed the moment his wife took her last breath...Their princess was just 4 years old when the king married Queen Cataliya..but their marriage wasn't successful because the king died after his first night with Queen Cataliya...she killed him and The Princess witnessed that she saw her father laying helpless in bed in the pool of blood...The Queen wasn't aware of the princess presence The poor child had no idea of what was going on but she felt her father's pain in her heart..she turned without any noise and go back to her bed...she couldn't fall asleep suddenly a women appear next to her bed..The woman told her not to scream..and she nodded Lady:"We are going far away from here..you mother was a good friend of mine..you like a daughter to me. My mission is to protect you now sleep you gonna wake up in a safe place" the princess fall asleep and she placed the princess on her back..covered her with the blankets and carefully left the PALACE IN A MEANWHILE Queen Cataliya was happy that she got rid of the king now she was going to rule the Palace the way she likes but the thought of the princess stuck on her my Her:"Liza "she yelled calling one of the maids Maid:"yes your Highness" she bowed down Her:"Bring me my princess she has to bond with her stepmother " Maid:"yes your highness" she quickly stood up..and goes to the princess's room..The bed was neatly made..The was no sign of her..but the note that says" You killed him" the note was folded..The maid quickly made her way to the Queen Maid:"she's not there your highness I found this" she handed the letter to the Queen Her:"you can leave" she was shocked by the letter..The kid was too young to write and yet she's not there..she needed to think fast Her:"Guads!!"they all gathered in the room Her:"I want you to find the princess. .someone kidnapped her" she faked the tears Her:"now I want my daughter back go and find her" she roared.they all nodded and prepared their weapons After seems to be forever the Palace solders came back with nothing..The Queen was beyond angry she wanted to kill them all Her:"where are they?"She shouted * * * The Princess And The women were far from the Palace.Their journey was long but that didn't stopped the woman from going After a long walk journey they arrived at Colombia Town. The woman entered a beautiful House the yard was clean with lovely flowers around it. the woman was shown the person who was going to be the princess Gurdian She knocked at the wooden door An old women opened up Woman:"we are here" Old woman:"you can come in my child you must be tired from the walking" she get in with the baby on her back Old woman:"oh this is the princess" she said while taking the baby from the back Woman:"yes she's safe here.. from now on she goes by the name 'Natalie ' .when she's old enough she will have to go back where she belongs. .she will discover her destiny when she's 21" she stood up and kissed the baby's forehead Woman:"when you old enough we will be waiting for you my Queen" she bow down Woman:"I don't have enough time I have to go..Please do take care of her..treat her like an egg" she smiled admiring the princess beauty Old woman:"Travel safe. Take this it shall protect you and give you strength" she handed her a gold necklace that was sparkling with shining light..

Narrated 18 years ago The Queen was dead leaving everyone with questions..her departure destroyed the Palace their king couldn't live without his Queen the love of his life.his world crashed the moment his wife took her last breath...Their princess was just 4 years old when the king married Queen Cataliya..but their marriage wasn't successful because the king died after his first night with Queen Cataliya...she killed him and The Princess witnessed that she saw her father laying helpless in bed in the pool of blood...The Queen wasn't aware of the princess presence The poor child had no idea of what was going on but she felt her father's pain in her heart..she turned without any noise and go back to her bed...she couldn't fall asleep suddenly a women appear next to her bed..The woman told her not to scream..and she nodded Lady:"We are going far away from here..you mother was a good friend of mine..you like a daughter to me. My mission is to protect you now sleep you gonna wake up in a safe place" the princess fall asleep and she placed the princess on her back..covered her with the blankets and carefully left the PALACE IN A MEANWHILE Queen Cataliya was happy that she got rid of the king now she was going to rule the Palace the way she likes but the thought of the princess stuck on her my Her:"Liza "she yelled calling one of the maids Maid:"yes your Highness" she bowed down Her:"Bring me my princess she has to bond with her stepmother " Maid:"yes your highness" she quickly stood up..and goes to the princess's room..The bed was neatly made..The was no sign of her..but the note that says" You killed him" the note was folded..The maid quickly made her way to the Queen Maid:"she's not there your highness I found this" she handed the letter to the Queen Her:"you can leave" she was shocked by the letter..The kid was too young to write and yet she's not there..she needed to think fast Her:"Guads!!"they all gathered in the room Her:"I want you to find the princess. .someone kidnapped her" she faked the tears Her:"now I want my daughter back go and find her" she roared.they all nodded and prepared their weapons After seems to be forever the Palace solders came back with nothing..The Queen was beyond angry she wanted to kill them all Her:"where are they?"She shouted * * * The Princess And The women were far from the Palace.Their journey was long but that didn't stopped the woman from going After a long walk journey they arrived at Colombia Town. The woman entered a beautiful House the yard was clean with lovely flowers around it. the woman was shown the person who was going to be the princess Gurdian She knocked at the wooden door An old women opened up Woman:"we are here" Old woman:"you can come in my child you must be tired from the walking" she get in with the baby on her back Old woman:"oh this is the princess" she said while taking the baby from the back Woman:"yes she's safe here.. from now on she goes by the name 'Natalie ' .when she's old enough she will have to go back where she belongs. .she will discover her destiny when she's 21" she stood up and kissed the baby's forehead Woman:"when you old enough we will be waiting for you my Queen" she bow down Woman:"I don't have enough time I have to go..Please do take care of her..treat her like an egg" she smiled admiring the princess beauty Old woman:"Travel safe. Take this it shall protect you and give you strength" she handed her a gold necklace that was sparkling with shining light..

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Novaselinah 2019-02-19 19:01:33

Hi Kedi, I love your stories ...love how imagination and how deeply you research certain events...You are truly talented. My friends and I are hooked on your books. Please get published ASAP so we can buy the books re-read the them. We are patiently waiting for "Imani the Chosen One". Let us know how we can financilly contribute...we know you love this and we'd love to see more of your work...but also know it can be costly.

Melisa kamanga 2019-02-17 10:44:31

Hey kedi , thank you for the amazing , stories that addict me. That take me to another world you are a good writer , can you please send me imani and on the above email , I can't wait.

Eunice 2019-02-13 09:21:35

Ey kedi l love your stories pliz give us imani and thor l am dying of suspense.keep up the good work l wish you can have them on hard copy so that we can buy it,you have a talent.pliz imani and thor we are waiting

Bernadette 2019-01-20 18:56:19

I really enjoyed your work Kedi .Am in love with your work.Am really looking forward to Thor and Imani.

Miss P 2019-01-10 07:37:50

When are we getting Imani and Smisos Story though you cant leave your readers hanging

P 2018-10-21 21:54:32

Yes pls write imani

Charlotte 2018-09-23 13:11:00

Hy kedi D cn u plz write imani plz plz plz im going crazy here

Mandisa 2018-08-28 18:11:17

I like where this is going can't wait to read the rest

Motlalepula 2018-08-07 12:59:58

Hello Kedi. I am also I die hard fan. Please do a published book on a hard copy so we can also buy your books talent like yours deserves cash. Waiting impatiently for Imani's diary

Nele 2018-08-06 13:51:44

Hy KD am sooo so moved by ur writing am waiting for Imani and Smiso keep it up

Mpume Ngubane 2018-07-26 22:58:51

Wow never in my life been this addicted to read. Thank you so much for what you have given us, we thank yhe almighty for you talent. My question for you is whether this is a continuation of your story? cause im dying to read about Smiso and Imani

Ningi 2018-07-25 19:34:37

HI Kedi, I absolutely love your stories. I was literally heart broken when I finished Nomhle cause I so wanna know what is gonna happen with Imani and Thor. So I guess I am also in line with the many people waiting for this story. Keep up the good work. Your fan.

Wendy 2018-07-23 15:16:49

Kedi you are so creative..I love yo stories. Also waiting for Thor and Imani's story

Phumelele 2018-07-21 14:03:00

Hi Kedibone... just wanted to tell you I admire your work and creativity,reading your books have brought out a lot of emotions in me. And could you please disclose when will you continue with Thor and Imani’s story

constance 2018-07-18 10:51:56

Good day Kedibone.....first of all I would like to say thank you for your stories, I really enjoy them a lot although they are addictive , I cannot get enough. I have read Kedi and Nomhlekhabo and have been waiting impatiently for the next one of Thor and Imani, so I would like to understand if this one is a continuation from Nomhlekhabo ?